Red Skin Writing

Red Skins

In room 11 we have recently been doing persuasive writing and one of our tasks we needed to do was  write a piece of writing to Mr Billings to say why we need red skins and if it was up to is expectations we would get a red skin and this is mine

• Why I need redskins
• Because they taste good
• I am hungry

Have you ever really really wanted just to bite in they sweet sugary goodness of a red skin? Don't lie I know you have. Well now I am going to tell exactly why I need redskins.

My first reason is they just taste so good. Don't you agree, yes of course you do. Redskins are literally the  best lollie ever. They taste better than anything in the world. (Mr Billings  am sure you would agree.) Just thinking about redskins is making me hungry.

I am so hungry right now that I could eat a container ship full of redskins. Trust me those are very big. I am so hungry  only crave redskins and won't eat anything else. I will die if I don't eat soon.