Sunday, 21 May 2017

Persuasive Writing

Persuasive Writing

Room 11 have recently been doing some persuasive writing Mr Billings gave us some options where we had to choose one of them and write about where you agree with the argument or not. and this is mine.

Should Students Be Allowed To Eat During Class?
  • Yes they should.
  • Because students might be so hungry and morning tea or lunch might be so far away they won't work or focus on anything they are supposed to.
  • People just get hungry.
Introduction
I am writing this argument because I think that students should be able to eat in class. (And because it's our writing task.) Anyway this is why students should be allowed to eat during class. Please enjoy.


My Smart Idea
I think students should be allowed to eat during class. Because students might be so hungry and morning tea or lunch might be so far away, that they won't work or focus on anything they are supposed to. (Teachers hate it when students aren't focusing.)
That is why students should be allowed to eat in class but their should be some rules about it like... they should be only allowed to have two items of food on their desk and that would stay there for the rest of the day. (e.g Fred put an apple and bag of chips on his desk to eat in class he wouldn't be allowed to eat his bag of chips and then go to his lunch box and put a biscuit on his desk)


Conclusion
That’s why I think that students should be allowed to eat during class!!!

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