Writing Sample

Writing Sample

Yesterday we were given four pictures to write about as a writing sample for Mr Billings. And this is mine. 

Learning to swim. Isla

“Hurry up Bill, remember last one to the troth is a rotten egg.” Yelled Bob.

“Oh ok.” Bill yelled back.

They both started racing towards the feeding troth where the farmer dumped his breakfast scraps from the day before.

“I won.” Screamed Bill hitting the side of the trough.

“No I won.” Yelled Bob sliding up next to him.

“Lets just call this a tie.” said Bill.

“Fine by me.” agreed Bob.

As they started wolfing down their breakfast.

“Oh I just got a mouthful of dry bacon.” “Hey Bill where does bacon come from, it tastes so good.” Asked Bob.

“I don't know but it's pretty good.” agreed Bill.

As they finished  breakfast they wandered over to the river to have a drink when suddenly a shadow was cast above us it was Billy.

“What are you ham steaks doing at the edge of the river.” He laughed

“Getting a drink.” they replied nervously.

“Ok you can have your drink in peace.” He snickerd

“Really.” They said surprised. (Usually Billy would've beaten them up.)

They knelt down to get a drink when Billy showed the in they icy cold river.

“Come on I did not even get a drink” yelled Bob

They started kicking furiously trying to fight the current to get back to dry land.

“Help we can't swim.” They yelled.

My Mama Mia Pizza

My Mama Mia Pizza

This term RM 11b have been working on making our Mama Mia Pizza. where we had to design and manufacture the pizza using the scroll sconce doe we used earlier in the term. 

I was working with my cooking partner Hollie and our design was a union sign. These are some pictures of our finished work. 

This Was Our Finished Pizza

This Is mine and Hollies Finishing poses 

Cutting the capsacum 

Time For the toppings

Ohhhhh Stuffed crust 

Almost done

Persuasive Writing

Persuasive Writing

Room 11 have recently been doing some persuasive writing Mr Billings gave us some options where we had to choose one of them and write about where you agree with the argument or not. and this is mine.

Should Students Be Allowed To Eat During Class?

• Yes they should.
• Because students might be so hungry and morning tea or lunch might be so far away they won't work or focus on anything they are supposed to.
• People just get hungry.

Introduction

I am writing this argument because I think that students should be able to eat in class. (And because it's our writing task.) Anyway this is why students should be allowed to eat during class. Please enjoy.

My Smart Idea

I think students should be allowed to eat during class. Because students might be so hungry and morning tea or lunch might be so far away, that they won't work or focus on anything they are supposed to. (Teachers hate it when students aren't focusing.)

That is why students should be allowed to eat in class but their should be some rules about it like... they should be only allowed to have two items of food on their desk and that would stay there for the rest of the day. (e.g Fred put an apple and bag of chips on his desk to eat in class he wouldn't be allowed to eat his bag of chips and then go to his lunch box and put a biscuit on his desk)

Conclusion

That’s why I think that students should be allowed to eat during class!!!